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The Hedgehog Salesman and the Desert Fox

5th grade fiction passage about a hedgehog tries to sell umbrellas: 255 words, six questions, an answer key and vocabulary.

5th grade fiction a hedgehog tries to sell umbrellas 255 words

The Hedgehog Salesman and the Desert Fox

Bram the hedgehog owned a cart loaded with brilliantly colored umbrellas, and he was absolutely convinced that he could sell every single one. So he pushed his heavy cart across the shifting dunes until he reached the home of Fenna, a desert fox.

"Umbrellas!" he announced. "The finest in the entire land! You will stay dry in any storm!"

Fenna blinked slowly. "It has not rained in this part of the desert for two years," she said. "I have no need to stay dry."

Bram was not discouraged in the least. "Then you must have the green one with the golden handle. It is the most beautiful umbrella ever made."

"It is certainly pretty," said Fenna, "but being pretty will not help me."

Bram sat down on the edge of his cart and sighed. For the first time that day, he stopped talking and began to look carefully at his surroundings. The sun was fierce and unrelenting. Fenna's fur was thick with dust, and she kept squinting miserably at the sky.

"Your trouble is not rain," Bram said slowly. "It is shade."

Fenna's ears lifted. "Exactly! The afternoons here are unbearably hot."

Bram opened the largest umbrella and planted its handle firmly in the sand. A wide circle of cool shade spread beneath it. Fenna laughed with relief and immediately traded three fat dates for it.

Bram learned something important that day. A wise seller does not simply shout about what he has to offer. He pauses to ask what the other person truly needs.

Questions

  1. What was Bram selling from his cart? in the text

  2. Why did Fenna say she had no need to stay dry? in the text

  3. What did Bram notice once he stopped talking and looked around? in the text

  4. What did Fenna trade for the large umbrella? in the text

  5. What was Fenna's real problem, according to Bram? think about it

  6. Why did Bram finally make a sale after so many failed tries? think about it

Words to know

dunes
hills of sand piled up by the wind
discouraged
feeling less hopeful after a setback
fierce
very strong and harsh
squinting
looking with eyes partly closed because of bright light
shade
a cool, dark place out of the sun
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One passage, three levels

The same topic and facts written three ways, so a mixed class can read and talk about one text. Each group’s sheet shows only a shape; the key says which is which.

● Easier · 214 words · Flesch-Kincaid grade 2.4

Bram the hedgehog had a cart full of bright umbrellas, and he was sure he could sell every one. So he pushed his cart across the dunes to the home of Fenna, a desert fox.

"Umbrellas!" he called. "The finest in the land! Stay dry in any storm!"

Fenna blinked slowly. "It has not rained here in two years," she said. "I do not need to stay dry."

Bram was not discouraged. "Then you need the green one, with the golden handle. It is the most beautiful umbrella ever made."

"It is pretty," said Fenna, "but pretty will not help me."

Bram sat down on the edge of his cart and sighed. For the first time that day, he stopped talking and looked around. The sun was fierce. Fenna's fur was dusty, and she kept squinting at the sky.

"Your problem is not rain," said Bram slowly. "It is shade."

Fenna's ears lifted. "Yes! The afternoons are very hot."

Bram opened the biggest umbrella and planted its handle in the sand. A wide circle of cool shade spread beneath it. Fenna laughed and traded three fat dates for it right away.

Bram learned something that day. A good seller does not shout about what he has. He asks what the other person truly needs.

▲ This passage · 255 words · Flesch-Kincaid grade 4.5

Bram the hedgehog owned a cart loaded with brilliantly colored umbrellas, and he was absolutely convinced that he could sell every single one. So he pushed his heavy cart across the shifting dunes until he reached the home of Fenna, a desert fox.

"Umbrellas!" he announced. "The finest in the entire land! You will stay dry in any storm!"

Fenna blinked slowly. "It has not rained in this part of the desert for two years," she said. "I have no need to stay dry."

Bram was not discouraged in the least. "Then you must have the green one with the golden handle. It is the most beautiful umbrella ever made."

"It is certainly pretty," said Fenna, "but being pretty will not help me."

Bram sat down on the edge of his cart and sighed. For the first time that day, he stopped talking and began to look carefully at his surroundings. The sun was fierce and unrelenting. Fenna's fur was thick with dust, and she kept squinting miserably at the sky.

"Your trouble is not rain," Bram said slowly. "It is shade."

Fenna's ears lifted. "Exactly! The afternoons here are unbearably hot."

Bram opened the largest umbrella and planted its handle firmly in the sand. A wide circle of cool shade spread beneath it. Fenna laughed with relief and immediately traded three fat dates for it.

Bram learned something important that day. A wise seller does not simply shout about what he has to offer. He pauses to ask what the other person truly needs.

■ Harder · 264 words · Flesch-Kincaid grade 6.1

Bram the hedgehog owned a cart loaded with brilliantly colored umbrellas, and he was absolutely convinced that he could sell every single one of them. So he pushed his heavy cart across the shifting dunes until he reached the home of Fenna, a desert fox, and announced in his loudest voice, "Umbrellas! The finest in the entire land! You will remain dry in any storm!"

Fenna blinked slowly. "It has not rained in this part of the desert for two years," she said, "so I have no need to remain dry."

Bram was not discouraged in the least. "Then you must have the green one with the golden handle, which is the most beautiful umbrella ever made."

"It is certainly pretty," said Fenna, "but being pretty will not help me."

Bram sat down on the edge of his cart and sighed. For the first time that day, he stopped talking and began to observe his surroundings carefully. The sun was fierce and unrelenting, and Fenna's fur was thick with dust as she squinted miserably at the sky.

"Your trouble is not rain," Bram said slowly. "Your trouble is shade."

Fenna's ears lifted. "Exactly! The afternoons here are unbearably hot."

Bram opened the largest umbrella and planted its handle firmly in the sand, and a wide circle of cool shade spread beneath it. Fenna laughed with relief and immediately traded three fat dates for it.

Bram learned something important that day. A wise seller does not simply shout about everything he has to offer; instead, he pauses to discover what the other person truly needs.

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Ideas for class

  • Before reading, put dunes, discouraged, fierce, squinting and shade on the board with their meanings from the Words to know section and have students predict what the story will be about.
  • Read it aloud once while students follow along, then have them reread it alone or with a partner. At a calm 100 words a minute it takes about 3 minutes to read aloud.
  • Use the Read it big button (or B) to put the text on the projector, and Show answer on one question at a time so the class commits to an answer first.
  • Question 5 asks the reader to infer. Ask students to point to the words in the passage that led them to their answer.
  • Ask students to retell the story in three sentences: how it began, what the problem was, and how it ended.
  • Print the student copy for independent work and keep the answer-key copy for yourself.

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What reading level is "The Hedgehog Salesman and the Desert Fox"?

It was written for 5th grade. It has 255 words and works out to a Flesch-Kincaid grade level of about 4.5. That is a formula's estimate from sentence length and syllables, and it is not a Lexile or a guided reading level, so check it against your students.

What do the questions ask?

There are six. 4 ask for something the text says directly and 2 ask the reader to work something out from clues. Each has an answer in the key, and the answers are written as a teacher would accept them, not as the only possible wording.

How long does it take to read?

About 3 minutes read aloud at 100 words a minute. For a one-minute fluency check, paste it into the fluency timer and use the word count.

Can I print it?

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